Exercise 5.1
In the examples below from the exercise, the point of interruption is shown by ||, the editing expression (if there is one) is underlined, and the point of restart. The phases of original expression, edit and repair are marked by [ ] and are in blue, red, and green respectively.
a. [ first I need to find out ] [ || um ]
[ I need to get an engine ]
b. [ Well, I think it's ] [ || you know ]
[ I think this has gone beyond, as it were, Al Qaeda as a specific network ]
c. [ in order to be ] [ || whereas ]
[ to actually get into something that most people would recognise as being Rome ]
d. [ a lot more good for you than European ] [ || ]
[ continental European youth hostels ]
a. first I need to find out something and I need to get an engine.
b. Well, I think it's done something and I think this has gone beyond, as it were, Al Qaeda as a specific network
c. in order to be somewhere to actually get into something that most people would recognise as being Rome
d. a lot more good for you than European and continental European youth hostels
d. is a revision rather than a repair, as the expression a lot more good for you than European youth hostels would have been incomplete rather than incorrect.